Peer Response #3

Hi Genard,

In Blog Post 6 you compare and contrast Metallica and Whitesnake. I like the fact that the two ultimately could be classified in the same genre but you highlight their differences in a good way. I like the personal connection you make with each band by giving an example of how you became acquainted with Metallica. The biggest advice I would give is adding media to your post to connect a visual to the information your reader is reading. I ultimately went to Spotify to compare and contrast the two groups, which helped me get a better understanding of what you want us to hear.

 

Shana Burwell

https://genardcross.wordpress.com/2016/02/22/blog-post-6/comment-page-1/#comment-4

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