Hi Angelina,
I think that the two artists have a lot in common and you do an excellent job of connecting the two artist’s similarities in mood. From a student’s prospective if there are differences, I think it would be beneficial to know about them. I would also suggest adding a visual. A great photo or a video would really help to support your beautiful descriptions. I found both artists on Spotify to listen to while reading your post. It helped me not just read but hear your perspective. I think your writing was perfect.You provided information about both artists and included a breakdown of each of their overall styles. Great Work!
~Shana
Link to Angelina’s Post: https://angelinacastellanooleary.wordpress.com/2016/02/08/blog-post-2/
ShanaBurwell 